Dreams Of You And I Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Dreams Of You And I

Rating: 5.0


Red berries growing on the vines, along
the roadside.

The scent in the air, as you and I walk hand
in hand through, the sunny haze there.

And the sparkle in your eyes, that keeps
me mesmerized.

As the sound of the river, bables
near by.

My heart stops, and is lost
in time.

Friday, December 7, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams,loving
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
:) Ted
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jennifer Birchall 07 December 2018

Beautiful poem Rebecca great imagery.

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Rebecca Navarre 09 December 2018

Thank you! .. Jennifer, For such a beautifully kind reply! .. I look forward to visiting your poetry page! .. Thank you again! .. God bless! ..

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Chinedu Dike 02 June 2019

Very deep and passionate write. Beautiful love poem, a smooth flow of pure joy. Thanks for sharing.

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Aqua Flower 12 December 2018

Dear poetess you have painted such a beautiful picture of love and its finest form.......... mixed with the elixir of nature. Beautifully expressed. thank you for sharing this!

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Rebecca Navarre 12 December 2018

Thank you! .. Aqua Flower, For such a kind and beautiful reply! .. Your poetry holds such beauty, heart and soul, that touches the readers heart so! .. Thank you ever so much! .. God bless! ..

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Susan Williams 10 December 2018

part 2. I felt like I was there where I have never been and experiencing your emotions. Top notch! ! ! ! 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ and onto my fav list so I can reread and remember capturing a moment can be done! ! !

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Rebecca Navarre 11 December 2018

Thank you! .. Dear Susan, For a heart so kind! .. Your poetry brings such deep meaning to heart, you hypnotize and inspire in every part! .. Thank you ever so much! .. God bless dear friend! ..

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Susan Williams 10 December 2018

That was a train wreck- so trying again! WoW! You captured a moment in time. This is what we try to capture and rarely succeed in doing.

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Rebecca Navarre 11 December 2018

Thank you! .. Dear Susan, For all your time spent on these replies! .. And Thank you for being so beautifully kind! .. Your poetry is like, a rainbow of light, that brings such, heart and delight! .. Thank you ever so much! .. Ever so many blessings! ..

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Susan Williams 10 December 2018

and remember capturing a moment can be done! ! !

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