Red berries growing on the vines, along
the roadside.
The scent in the air, as you and I walk hand
in hand through, the sunny haze there.
And the sparkle in your eyes, that keeps
me mesmerized.
As the sound of the river, bables
near by.
My heart stops, and is lost
in time.
Very deep and passionate write. Beautiful love poem, a smooth flow of pure joy. Thanks for sharing.
Dear poetess you have painted such a beautiful picture of love and its finest form.......... mixed with the elixir of nature. Beautifully expressed. thank you for sharing this!
Thank you! .. Aqua Flower, For such a kind and beautiful reply! .. Your poetry holds such beauty, heart and soul, that touches the readers heart so! .. Thank you ever so much! .. God bless! ..
part 2. I felt like I was there where I have never been and experiencing your emotions. Top notch! ! ! ! 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ and onto my fav list so I can reread and remember capturing a moment can be done! ! !
Thank you! .. Dear Susan, For a heart so kind! .. Your poetry brings such deep meaning to heart, you hypnotize and inspire in every part! .. Thank you ever so much! .. God bless dear friend! ..
That was a train wreck- so trying again! WoW! You captured a moment in time. This is what we try to capture and rarely succeed in doing.
Thank you! .. Dear Susan, For all your time spent on these replies! .. And Thank you for being so beautifully kind! .. Your poetry is like, a rainbow of light, that brings such, heart and delight! .. Thank you ever so much! .. Ever so many blessings! ..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful poem Rebecca great imagery.
Thank you! .. Jennifer, For such a beautifully kind reply! .. I look forward to visiting your poetry page! .. Thank you again! .. God bless! ..