Timeless Butterflies... Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Timeless Butterflies...

Rating: 5.0


Cross the meadow. On the other side of the hill,
down by, the old watermill. Watching the water swirl,
a little boy, and a little girl. Skipping rocks and fishing,
closing their eyes, and wishing. Climbing trees to
touch the skies, then jumping down, to chase butterflies.
The sun begins to set with a chill, as a little birdie cries
out with a trill. But for them, time has stood still.

Timeless Butterflies...
Thursday, March 11, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: youth,autumn,reflections
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
painting from free paintings/photos.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 11 March 2021

WOW! Dear Becca, what a most beautiful tender touching heart poem is this! Congratulations to share this emotive feel! 5 Stars, dearest for you!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 March 2021

I cite here your loveliest lines and words: the finalconclusion of all these beauteous cryings-out: ....as a little birdie cries out with a trill. But for them, time has stood still. Such a fascinating phrase! God Bless you greatest, my dea friend

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 March 2021

I am happy that my two responses have gone through..................to you. This amazing poem goes to my Favourites. Thank you for sharing

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Kostas Lagos 11 March 2021

Beautiful poem Rebecca! Really beautiful

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Varsha M 11 March 2021

Lovely one Rebecca. It brought smile on my face. Refreshing childhood glorious memories. Thoroughly enjoyed the journey. Into my favourite.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 March 2022

This beautiful poem is timeless

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 April 2021

Such a great recollection of the past where the poet is part of the plot as a keen observer! Magnificently presented where the poet puts spotlight on a tender and delightful creature... timeless!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 April 2021

Memories are constantly the best when we look back at our kids time, thinking of the plays we did and all other sweet things. Sure 5 Stars Full. I have given that earlier below and to My Favourites!

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kyvin nash 13 March 2021

Nice...

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Susan Williams 13 March 2021

I give this 5 stars and a fav

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