Drink With Me. Poem by Fay Slimm

Drink With Me.

Rating: 5.0


Measure me sunrise, come sip it with me.
Drink down dawn's song with iced summer finings.
Blossoms of love wait to be sampled, trees
Offer their nectar not only to kind
Bumble bees, - let us imbibe their fragrant
Aromas, mixed with perfumed sea breezes,
Which cannot be tasted until latent
Sun has burnished it's essence on soft keys
Of locked Autumn - oh please drink with me, then
I promise you'll want to sample again.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Wells 13 May 2009

Gorgeous imagery of natures' best offerings. Seasonal and heart-warming. Nice one, Fay

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Ashraful Musaddeq 12 May 2009

'Of locked Autumn - oh please drink with me, then I promise you'll want to sample again.' Lovely 10

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Kee Thampi 11 May 2009

wish to smile with this nice poet Of locked Autumn - oh please drink with me, then I promise you'll want to sample again. nic to read and to keep in heart

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Bob Gibson 08 May 2009

will drink with thee, ! I will taste the nectar of your being i can see your sun arising, i see your reflection in the stream i catch your thoughts and taste them, just like the moon above but most of all my dear, from you you utter love!

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Fiona Davidson 06 May 2009

Wonderful dreamy write Fay....gorgeous phrasing...Fi 10++

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Ashraful Musaddeq 30 May 2009

This is a marvelous poem. Here inn the autumn dawn, the environment is so cool that the sun burnishes it’s essence on soft keys. Anyone if drink that situation he will be simple again. This is the core idea, the message of this magnificent poem. Imageries used in this charming poem are excellent. We can get the taste of that autumn dawn’s environment easily even if we close our eyes. This is another aspect of this poem. The message and the pictorial attribute have added an excellent value to this poem. I am delighted give my full 10.

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C. P. Sharma 28 May 2009

Nature is much more intoxicating giving ever lasting joy. CP

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Juneil Sechico 27 May 2009

nice piece to drink Fay! two thumbs up!

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Dr.subhendu Kar 20 May 2009

simply beautiful, smooches heart of reader, flow ingenious across passion,10++, thanks for sharing

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Shashendra Amalshan 19 May 2009

so coool...nature poems always relaxes my mind thanks...with love shan 10+++

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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