Kim McInnis

Rookie (14 January 1989 / LaSalle Ontario)

Driving - Poem by Kim McInnis

the painfilled notes of my song ring out
dripping ironically
broken in mangled gasps
sobbing as the car tears farther and farther away

I feel a part of me dying
as something new is born


Comments about Driving by Kim McInnis

  • (3/13/2005 12:02:00 PM)


    I scribbled this down in the car on my way to Toroto over summer vacation. It's narrative; a really sentimental song came on the radio and started to break up as I drove away from the signal. Getting away from the troubles and torment of regular life in my regular place. Or, in essence, taking a vacation. (Report) Reply

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  • (3/12/2005 12:15:00 AM)


    Once again Kim you have totally curve balled me. I am having trouble deciphering this one. send me a message on how this one plays out. (Report) Reply

  • (1/13/2005 9:02:00 PM)


    I wrote a comment in your comment section.
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 13, 2005



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