ETERNITY
when the rain stops,
smell of earth and flowers
fill up the air;
when stops the song
we carry the tune along.
Rajkumar@Kolkata26-01-2008
Another beautiful verse with a lot of meaning....yes when the song stops we carry the tune 10
When the rain stops All our sins are washed away In its drench when we long to trench Where has stopped its song It still reverberates in our feet Only changes the sound pitter-patter skitter-skatter in our walks helter skeleter And lashing all our steps Everywhere except the raindrops itself
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
yes, when the song stops and we carry it along then it does become eternal.thanks for this lovely droplet of wisdom.