DEWALI-1
sparkle of lights in your eyes
subdues the twinkle of Dewali night
the air flows with nostalgic music
over-shadowing the crackers plight
untold words form a lump in the throat
no one knows when time took its flight.
Rajkumar@Kolkata23-10-2008
lovely dewali write...tastes sweet as much as the festival sweets exchanged...no less it would do so to your 'love' also there...nice droplets...thanks...10
Lovely imagery here...brings back happy Diwali memories. a neat poem
No more subjugation to crackers which is only adding sound pollution but if it has to festive, it should be the illuminants only enlightening new ray of hope in us and taking our old nibbling feelings in the smokes belching and bellowing higher and higher away from us.
Hi Raj namaste this is your first i am doing.....but boy... hit me like a freight train awesome you write beautiful...great...ita tenner cheers
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
who doesn't love diwali, atleast i do.though not the cracker part. a beautiful poem...