Drops Poem by Rini Shibu

Drops

Rating: 5.0


Eyes that search among the clouds
In a few seconds they melt and fall
Wetness when felt on the ground
Then realize they are drowned
Still in hope look for the sky
Where it can find the warmth again
But deep inside could feel the pain

Tuesday, August 6, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: eyes
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jane Campion 06 August 2019

The images are compelling forcing us to empathise. Truly poetic and mysterious. Thank you. I also thank you for your lovey comments on A Million Sorrows.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 August 2022

A wonderful little poem Rini....loved it

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Suresh Kumar Ek 11 September 2020

a nice poem like the cool dark cloud

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 09 August 2019

Hope sweeps the desperation away.. You are so positive at your seeking mind, your poem is soaked with the clouds of passion. Thanks for sharing this with us. 10++

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Unnikrishnan E S 07 August 2019

“Still in hope they look for the sky”.. It is this hope that leads us in our life. A poem of positivity..

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Lamar Cole 06 August 2019

This is a very good thought provoking poem about eyes.

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