Drops like dew from sky,
Fall tip tip slowly,
Lands on ground;
Tipsy odour of petrichor,
Stimulates ambiance sexy;
Tiny plants rise above,
The shells cracking open;
Seek fresh moist and bloom;
Breeze flows in tinge,
Cool magical music,
As if saying,
'Feel my touch, if you can';
Entire ambiance turns on;
Stimulates my soul
In dark cloudy nights;
© Sadashivan Nair
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Your beautiful poem mesmerised our souls.Really enjoyed reading!
A passionate poem that spells romance and the magic of rain drops. Subtle yet effective! Congratulations!
As if saying, 'Feel my touch, if you can'; Entire ambiance turns on; Stimulates my soul In dark cloudy nights; - - - - - - - Th earth becomes alive with the touch of rain, there is music in the air.A romantic write- -thanks for sharing.Congratulations for being selected Poet of the Day.
Tipsy odour of petrichor...perfect. There is something about that scent that makes one naturally high. Just like your poem. The imagery is so vivid. I was able to see hear and touch the raindrops. That's quite an accomplishment on your part. And so worthy of Poem Of The Day! Congratulations! !
sounds good and beautiful. Thanks for sharing and congrats as our MPOD. You can read my (Meatarians, Mr injustice and Her love in distinct hues)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a beautiful poem of the life giving properties that dew like drops can have on man kinds hearts? ............wonderfully written.