Dust Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Dust

Rating: 4.7


A cloud of dust rises in the air
The trees bend double by the gust

The empty space between planets
Contains measurable amounts of dust

When it’s rainy or dewy
Don’t stride with thrust

That’s my heart on the ground
In the color of the rust

(2008/10/12)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 18 October 2008

A v e r y beautiful poem. 10 for it.

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Sarah Abdullah 15 October 2008

Loved how you made the word(Dust) able to be related to million things and million feelings

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Annie Girl 15 October 2008

so organized thoughts nice

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Ershad Mazumder 15 October 2008

I love your poem.Iran is the global HQ of poetry.

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Cherry Zhai 14 October 2008

Very thoughtful, reveal calmness of your heart.

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Randy Hogan 11 January 2009

STONE BREAKS AT THE ENDS OF TIME. WITH A MIGHT BOOM TOGETHER I WILL BE WITH YOU AT LAST.....TO START ALL OVER AGAIN IN SANDS OF TIME AS SEED OF TEARDROPS OF LOVE IN YOUR EYES wow you are timeless... such beautiful poem..

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Dr Kamran Haider 26 October 2008

What you have said in few lines is difficult to write in a whole book... I love your way with words... The empty space between planets Contains measurable amounts of dust Beautiful indeed... Regards, Kamran

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Elle B 24 October 2008

Easy to understand and not to forget. Good piece of work

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Triin Kann 22 October 2008

Simple words, but yet such a magnificent poem. So beautiful is all I can say.

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Leon & Sarah Harris 18 October 2008

i.e.u so beautiful and fantistic word!

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