The Angel Of Freedom Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

The Angel Of Freedom

Rating: 4.9

Fell asleep
Without lullaby and tale
Rested in peace
Free from sorrow and jail

The whole journey was a nightmare
A lot of despair blood and gore

Now I’m sure
She is glad and secure
In the sky all things are pure

God sings sweet lullaby to her
Where there're no humanoids
To err

(A Memorial to the oppressed martyr, Neda A.S.)


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Rajkumar Mukherjee 04 July 2009

DearPersian Nightingale, Its a nice tribute with good lmageries, short and sweet.Nice rhyming.I liked the portrayal A10 from me Rajkumar I'm still in Singapore but can find time to respond to poet-pals request for comments. Today I posted about 3/4 poems from here. Please find time to read, comment and rate. If possible tell others that I'm back, --Rajkumar

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Lynda Robson 30 June 2009

A heartfelt tribute, well done, 10 Lynda xx

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Rani Turton 30 June 2009

A well-written piece on this sad episode.

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Reshma Ramesh 30 June 2009

touching tribute.......well penned

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Surya . 29 June 2009

so she is in safe hand. beautiful voted10 surya

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it's only in death that we are truly free..make the most of life beautiful tribute to your friend..

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* Sunprincess * 23 July 2014

...........the angel of freedom creates beautiful and peaceful imagery...beautiful write...

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Surayya Abbas 16 July 2009

A beautiful poem nice to read.

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Allan Macli Borges 08 July 2009

dear, it is beautiful! ! ! very touching and writen with truth...10

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Adi Cox 05 July 2009

I like the way this poem ends. It is open ended and invites the reader to ponder all the possible meanings for the word err, in context to what this poem is saying. Humanoids always err. to err is human. err 10/10

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