Should you die before your death
Peace is born on every breath
Beyond the tongue or hiss of lips
Beyond all thought that slowly drips
Without the mind that thinks to move,
The stars and flowers have naught to prove
Love is born in gentle eyes
And knots within the heart unties.
stylish and eloquentwritten. But hey, you already know that Steve
When ego dies before it's body's death..........Peace is born in every breath.......Great Write....10+++
Lovely first lines.Your rhymes add music to the form.10.for you. Kind regards, Sandra
Very brautiful. Was meant to say beautiful but will leave that freudian slip...! Is there a touch of brautigan here? Certainly for the beauty that haunts the words and the fab title that drew me in. Love it. HG: -) xx
I do like this Wojja, use of words again show you as a talented, humane and thoughtful writer. Well done
A choice between an early death and meditation? ? ? Two very different things, but tied down by us mortals...Quite likely, meditation is getting killed to death..! ! Keep meditating, though, Wojja. And ye have the chance to become immortal (well, atleast in the our minds) . Hail, Sir Wojja! Cheers. Subroto
'Should you die before your death Peace is born on every breath' nice words---good write -10 anjali
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Love the poem 10+++ Keep writing............