As I wake, and the storm clouds
fill my eyes, and I pray for them
to pass by. Wait silently and sigh,
watch the rain fall from the skies.
Listen, to it pattering down. The
sound, as it's hitting the ground. And
the puddles left to ripple around. To the heart
it seeps down, and in an echo, new life is found.
Beautiful description of a few phenomena of nature and their soothing effects on troubles human mind incorporated in this equally beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
Thank you! .. Ratnakar, For such a thoughtful and beautifully kind reply! .. I look forward visiting more of your very moving and beautiful poetry! .. Thank you ever so much! .. God bless! ..
Lovely nature poem! A pleasure to read. Great is the sketch of nature that has so much power to draw us.
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This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautifully written. I had the sense of a deep unhappiness accompanied by dark grey storm clouds and the sadness of the rain falling but gradually it seemed that the sounds of the rain turned into a pitter patter that was companionable and rather comforting. We are a species whose deep sorrow can still be comforted. 10+++++++++++++++++++
Dear Susan, Thank you! .. For such a deeply beautiful and heartwarming reply! .. Ever so many blessings! ..