Echo Of Adolescent Desires Poem by Om Chawla

Echo Of Adolescent Desires



Echo of adolescent desires
When heard in declining age
Demonstrates shameless indiscretion,
Uncovers depravity from within the cage.

Saturday, April 5, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: social
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Grantham 09 April 2014

A short but truthful write. Getting along in age one may think of desires past. Just a thought. Good.

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Dinesan Madathil 09 April 2014

Gandhi is an institution and to feel him one requires a pious outlook as well. To trace flips in Gandhi is not wrong but we cannot afford to smash that idol for reasons historic not historical. Your poem has its own perceptive quality though some of us refuse to learn anthing from it, Chowlaji.

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Valsa George 09 July 2015

Yes, in declining old age, adolescent desires when let loose, shows only depravity of mind! People should grow with age and each stage of life expects a certain code of conduct! Brief, but so pithy!

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Dinesan Madathil 12 April 2014

You are obviously convincing and I pay obeisance to your strata and erudition, Chawlaji.

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Dinesan Madathil 12 April 2014

You are obviously convincing and I pay obeisance to your strata and erudition, Chawlaji.

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Dinesan Madathil 12 April 2014

You are absolutely convincing here, Chawlaji and I pay obeisance to your elderly notions.I request you not to develop any piety towards the idols which are made of normal metal which might be glittering before the eyes of some of us. Thank you erudite sir.

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Om Chawla 11 April 2014

Dinesh ji, believe me I have no intention of teaching anything to anybody. I have only expressed my own feelings based on my perceptions and understanding and that what probably all of us do despite our claims to being objective. I am a simple human given to my own weaknesses and carry no pretensions to being saintly. If idol is crumbling it is because of its own material. Howsoever the pedestal of faith and reverence over which I had placed my idol has crashed because of the jolts that it was subjected to. It is curious that on one hand the then prevalent institution of 'Sati' was banished but of using women as a material for man's gratification remained enshrined in our behaviour.. I am not a so called feminist, but I strongly feel the unjust treatment meted out to women whether by Lord Rama, who forsake Sita, his wife or.............. Dineshji, thanks for the advice, I will definitely try to develop pious outlook and for this I must first understand piety; isn't it.

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