Ecstasy Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Ecstasy

Rating: 5.0


Who should be blamed for this hijacking?
Was it me something who was lacking?
My sweet dreams were hijacked,
The kite couldn't be tracked,
Ecstasy! Silently enjoyed my kite's off tracking!

Sunday, April 23, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: divinity
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khalida Bano Ali 25 April 2017

An interesting poem, enjoyed it............................................

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Bharati Nayak 24 April 2017

Who should be blamed for this hijacking? Was it me something who was lacking? My sweet dreams were hijacked, The kite couldn't be tracked, Ecstasy! Silently enjoyed my kite's off tracking! - - - - - - - - - - A lovely poem.Read along with Valsaji's poem it gives joy and ecstasy.Thanks to you and Valsaji for sharing such great writes.

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Bri Edwards 24 April 2017

nice job playing with word order in line 2 in order to get the rhyme. but i had to read it three times to approve! :) hey! most of this belongs to Valsa [i guess; i had not read her poem before now]. So, it was not just the kite which was hijacked! ! ! bri ;)

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 April 2017

Silently enjoyed! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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