Ecstasy In The Rains (Inspired By Haiku No.17 By Mahtab Bangali) Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Ecstasy In The Rains (Inspired By Haiku No.17 By Mahtab Bangali)

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Hills may be different
but clouds are the same,
raining at both of us,
while bathing in the pleasant showers,
I feel a sexy and exciting touch,
So you are also bathing in the rains,
the naughty bird is singing,
"May it continue for many hours! "
O he is at a greater height
starring at you,
so you are also burning in desires,
but rains cannot extinguish it.
It's fire of love,
stop at once bathing in the rains,
it'll will give air to this exciting fire
and muddy stains, too.
Your hill is not far from here,
if ecstasy increases
I may be there.

Ecstasy In The Rains (Inspired By Haiku No.17 By Mahtab Bangali)
Thursday, July 5, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: rains
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 21 February 2019

wow superb SIR- so you are also burning in desires, but rains cannot extinguish it. It's fire of love, stop at once bathing in the rains, //// love this poem

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Red Soul 05 July 2018

There's a strange charming beauty in rain that can enchant almost every living being. A fine and wonderful poem Jawad sahab. Thanks for sharing.

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Kelly Kurt 05 July 2018

You are a must read poet. I wish more people read your works.

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Khalid Saifullah 05 July 2018

A nice exloitation of love feelings in the rains.

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Aqua Flower 05 July 2018

This is sexy poem that speaks of love in a very passionate way! I love how you use the rain, mud and air in this piece to describe the desires of love! Excellent! :)

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