Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

Veteran Poet - 1,246 Points (Iran, Islamic republic of)

Edge Of Victory - Poem by Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

Edge of victory is not near yet
I have to try, the last resort is remain, I bet

For superior goals we need to build small acts
Sometimes for winning the game of idiot people, some poor people should be as small as the rats

These goals are nothing
They don't make us king

We should live pure, like the brave devotes
It's important to take all the humanity's votes!

Poet's Notes about The Poem

in our life we have superior goals to be achieved! ! !

Comments about Edge Of Victory by Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

  • (8/24/2012 6:26:00 AM)

    You are simply magnificient..
    Thank you for providing us with a new style.....
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  • (8/19/2012 4:59:00 PM)

    Yes...It's important to take all the humanity's votes... unfortunately usually not done... good poem... Terry (Report) Reply

  • Hamid Negah (8/17/2012 8:13:00 AM)

    Ellias, i loved last two sentences we should live pure......., these thoughts are the symbol of victory. (Report) Reply

  • Betty Bolden (8/17/2012 5:48:00 AM)

    wonderful words and amazing thoughts (Report) Reply

  • Adam Mckim (8/12/2012 3:51:00 AM)

    Nice write. I like this one. (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (8/9/2012 6:52:00 AM)

    Victory will only gain when no one will be oppressed but all equally treated fair, become stronger and expressive, and impressed, we need all victory for all people no less_Soul (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 9, 2012

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