Ego (A Senryu) Poem by Sandra Martyres
Ego (A Senryu)
A little ruse and
His ego was badly bruised
Not much left to lose
Another excellent senryu, Sandra. Have you ever noticed that a man's ego can be bruised a lot quicker than the ego of most women? Cute poem! Carl.
harmony flowing in this very thougthful senryu....would brush off any bruise
Great lines, Sandra; flowing so harmoniously. A good writer's pen should flow with golden ink..(smile)
We do hate to lose face. Even a dog knows when he's being made a fool of! (smile)
A very amusing Haiku, our ego's are source of lots of trouble.
Good.good.good! A little rhyming always make a haiku or senryu sound better, though haiku specialists say rhyming is not necessary in haiku/senry.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/6/2025 2:05:06 AM # 1.0.0
we all basically have small egos u see, can't expect anything to be left! good read...