Ego (A Senryu) Poem by Sandra Martyres

Great lines, Sandra; flowing so harmoniously. A good writer's pen should flow with golden ink..(smile)

harmony flowing in this very thougthful senryu....would brush off any bruise

A nice one, sandra........

Another excellent senryu, Sandra. Have you ever noticed that a man's ego can be bruised a lot quicker than the ego of most women? Cute poem! Carl.

we all basically have small egos u see, can't expect anything to be left! good read...

We do hate to lose face. Even a dog knows when he's being made a fool of! (smile)

EXCELLENT! ! truth bloomed beautifully! 10+

A very amusing Haiku, our ego's are source of lots of trouble.

Good.good.good! A little rhyming always make a haiku or senryu sound better, though haiku specialists say rhyming is not necessary in haiku/senry.

I find this piece amusing.Well done..