Ego Playing Bin Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Ego Playing Bin

Rating: 4.4


World vast is as seen,
Vast domain within unseen
Amidst ego's din!
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Haiku | 03.04.13 |

Saturday, August 31, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: universe,world
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The art of life is to listen from within even amidst ego playing its cantankerous bin.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 01 September 2019

It's ego that makes us thinking that we are supreme otherwise what of us, what of earth and what of our solar system! We are so much insignificant yet significant due to our ego.

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 September 2019

I'm glad to read what you say Akhtar Saab. There are two ways they say to reach the pinnacle of evolution and reach the supreme. One, to reduce your ego to its smallest size so that you can see the soul/the conscience. Another is to make it infinitely big as it were to be one with the supreme.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 August 2019

Brilliantly brought out the ego and loveliness of heart, Beautiful Haiku is cutely and incisively presented. Thanks a lot.10

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 September 2019

Thank you dear KM for liking the Haiku.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 31 August 2019

Our ego must always be guarded by the power of the heart and mind. Brilliant lines in its simplicity. Another great thought to ponder about.

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 September 2019

Thanks dear reader Rose, I liked your interpretation.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 31 August 2019

Again a thought provoking haiku, but it reads true impressive. I have enjoyed your lovely haiku. God Bless you. A 10 and much more for this cute and sweey haiku.

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 September 2019

In a hurry I read 'true impressive' as 'too impressive', good heavens, thank you so much for such liberal feedback.

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Julia Luber 31 August 2019

Great snippet on something profound and preponderant!

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 September 2019

Thanks for your feedback dear reader poet JL, it narrowly missed being called too ponderous.

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