World vast is as seen,
Vast domain within unseen
Amidst ego's din!
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Haiku | 03.04.13 |
Brilliantly brought out the ego and loveliness of heart, Beautiful Haiku is cutely and incisively presented. Thanks a lot.10
Our ego must always be guarded by the power of the heart and mind. Brilliant lines in its simplicity. Another great thought to ponder about.
Again a thought provoking haiku, but it reads true impressive. I have enjoyed your lovely haiku. God Bless you. A 10 and much more for this cute and sweey haiku.
In a hurry I read 'true impressive' as 'too impressive', good heavens, thank you so much for such liberal feedback.
Thanks for your feedback dear reader poet JL, it narrowly missed being called too ponderous.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It's ego that makes us thinking that we are supreme otherwise what of us, what of earth and what of our solar system! We are so much insignificant yet significant due to our ego.
I'm glad to read what you say Akhtar Saab. There are two ways they say to reach the pinnacle of evolution and reach the supreme. One, to reduce your ego to its smallest size so that you can see the soul/the conscience. Another is to make it infinitely big as it were to be one with the supreme.