All these words in my head
but like a bowl of beads
without any form of thread
how can I string them together
The sentences just will not form
and subject matter is a jumble
of what to write I am torn
emotions cannot be humble
Cute poem, good play on the whole concept of poems. Light hearted but sincere.
emotions cannot be humble...wonderful line...i too feel that sometimes...all tied in knots...no flowing thoughts that can translate into words and lines...regards
I love the peom it is so corect in confusion and saddness. It is exacly how i do feel.
Words sleep deep within awaiting the kiss to bring them to life, the twinkling of a family eye, to walk the beach under clear blue sky, to sit and watch the blossom fall, the beautiful sound of the Skylarks call. These are the kisses of awakening. Not forgetting friendships hand. Thoughtful write Chris 10
Yeah I also feel same way Sometime it just flows non stop sometime words never seem to come an excellent write
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Lovely analogy. Love the comparison and play on words.