When at the end of my
closing day
Let not the sound of sad
music play
Let not many tears run down
your face
For this is a temporary
resting place
For there will be a shout from
heaven above
I will be raised by God's
eternal love
As I step into the light of
God's eternal day
I will watch the children of God
at play
It is here that I
will stay
And see Jesus whom the world
could not sway
For Jesus has said I am
the way
Beautiful and so inspiring piece, so well written and full of faith and love.
My friend Darwin Henry ('Hank') Beuning mentioned this poem and said it was very good. He was right. Nicely done.
That is a real good poem, and I will share that poem. I am so thankful God has blessed me to communicate with Christian friends through gospel poems. I rate this poem a 10, I would rate it even higher if I could.
What a wonderful poem.I really enjoy it.Thanks for sharing.
A wonderful poem, I enjoyed reading it and will refer to it often.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Amen, Herbert...Your choice in employing couplet format works well....And the storyline? I see it as you wrote it & concur on your close-out...Nicely Done ~FjR~