End Poem by adam cliff

End

Rating: 5.0
 


the silent scream
a waking dream
the end of life is near
but the voices i hear
they make me fear
that the time to end is near...

© AJ CLIFF

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Melvina Germain 12 August 2006

I find this very clear in fact. It clearly states that the end is near, I must say though it is very sad. Especially sad, due to the fact that someone so young is writing these words. I definitely rate this as a 10 pointer. Excellent--Melvina

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C M 10 August 2006

this is suicidal.. sad... good but sad

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Sydne Morris 09 March 2006

You write good poetry but you need to make your message clearer good job though

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