the silent scream
a waking dream
the end of life is near
but the voices i hear
they make me fear
that the time to end is near...
© AJ CLIFF
I find this very clear in fact. It clearly states that the end is near, I must say though it is very sad. Especially sad, due to the fact that someone so young is writing these words. I definitely rate this as a 10 pointer. Excellent--Melvina
this is suicidal.. sad... good but sad
You write good poetry
but you need to make your message clearer
good job though
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