Sorrow

Rating: 4.8

the tear of sorrow runs down my cheek
friendship is what I seek
I used to think I had it all
but now my backs against the wall
and my heart has been broken
and these words are unspoken
I look back at my past
and wish the sorrow would end my life at last...

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 17 October 2008

well done, beautiful sad poem 10

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Sweet, evocative, touching and succinct - a truly fine piece. Forgive me for suggesting though that you might want to spell/grammar-check? Other than that - keep them coming!

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Anna Russell 09 March 2006

This is strong Adam. I just hope you didn't really mean that last line! You've kept it simple and to the point and I can really see an improvement. Hugs Anna xxx

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Charles Chaim Wax 09 March 2006

the sad heart needing release but not in the conclusion of breath but in creation poetry's miracle a fine poem

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