Manonton Dalan

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Enduring >>> - Poem by Manonton Dalan

I saw man pale; cold
walking slowly up road
slung across his shoulder
bag full of heavy tools
bending his back; horseshoe
I pity him for rest is due

in silence I wish him luck
maybe find a lighter task
for I sense intense agony
deep in him weakening a day
yet he tried to step a ladder
too stiff even those younger

Topic(s) of this poem: work


Comments about Enduring >>> by Manonton Dalan

  • Paul Warren (12/9/2015 7:28:00 PM)


    nicely structured and an excellent word picture (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 9, 2015



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