Enduring >>> Poem by Manonton Dalan

Enduring >>>



I saw man pale; cold
walking slowly up road
slung across his shoulder
bag full of heavy tools
bending his back; horseshoe
I pity him for rest is due

in silence I wish him luck
maybe find a lighter task
for I sense intense agony
deep in him weakening a day
yet he tried to step a ladder
too stiff even those younger

Wednesday, December 9, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: work
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paul Warren 09 December 2015

nicely structured and an excellent word picture

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Manonton Dalan

Manonton Dalan

virginia, usa
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