Endlessly Poem by Manonton Dalan

Endlessly

Rating: 5.0


for every thread that bond
is like a nerve to a flesh
crimson pump to the beat
marvel; moments keep

pinkish lips parted, a sound
twinkle of an eye, jewel of a crown
a gentle touch, very ecstatic
passionate kiss, so romantic

to dream of you is noble
every nerve endings tremble
suppress by tender hug
flowing in the sea of blog

dream on petals strewn sheets
fragrance cover every square feet
cuddle those softies gingerly
whispering my name endlessly

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jim Valero 30 September 2008

Beautiful imagistic poem. Short phrases like close-ups render impassioned moments vivid to reader's imagination who can visualize the poem's suggestive imagery. The sound-content of the poem is texturally entrancing. Good work!

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June Feir-Cruz 11 September 2008

Oh! La la! Mon Dieu, beautifully written and oh so sexy.

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Estrella Baldemosa 08 September 2008

romantic...beautiful...

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Blue Eyes 24 August 2008

i love your choice of words...like pinkish which indicates to a sexy woman with hight taste...keep writing good stuff.

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Manonton Dalan

Manonton Dalan

virginia, usa
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