Man dressed in black
Holding high and tight
His scythe.
Teasing me
When I pass or
-maybe gaze at me a while-
saving me for last.
Warm eastern dawn emits
light and heat, then fall
into arms of ablaze horizon
In the distance sits
moon's dim light along
side the lone star, acting
like a hundred lights.
Tired love,
no other
awaits me.
Should I love through
more repeating hours or is
love a constant farewell?
Almedia S Knight
November 22,2009
Nothing is certain and short lived! .............You tell the truth like a flowing river and the reader watches its rhyme.
'Our spirits remain love, And a constant Farewell' thats the quality of love, unworldly, just its reflection in a tear is visible..., thoughtful and beautiful, thanks for sharing 10
Your point is well taken. Love is intangible, ethereal yet here, a paradox.
I know of what you write, at 75, I to kinow that everything is ephemeral. I don't even have to buy green banans any more. Having said that, you have penned a very lovely poem and I had a great time reading it. Keep up the excellent work, Lynn.
A hundred lights for a night Knowing I’m tired … For no other love Awaits me........................... love of years splashes onshore heart yet never riffles as when a sage, wonderful write by imagery and metaphors,10+++, thanks for sharing
Should I love through more Repeating hours? Ahead of us lies eternity; Our spirits remain love, And a constant Farewell....ya and that is called love..repeating hours and its remain speak of only love..beautifully presented theme with deep meaning...i loved its contents....10 read mine....come home...home bound..no separate ways...divorce
Meaningful poem rather sad but shouts out so loud well written.... on this planet going for billion of years our lives are so ephemeral. thanks for the read of ++++++10 regards
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Excellent and made LOVE ephemeral Ten++ Ms. Nivedita UK Cordially invite you read my poems with comments and….please watch out new posts PS Our spirits remain love, // And a constant Farewell. Unparallel niv