Eternity Poem by Devanshu Patel

Eternity

Rating: 5.0


This is
Not only a
'TIME'
We've spent together...
But,
1,065,096,000
Times
My Heart
Echoed your name
'My Dear'
During this..
27 years...
324 months...
1408 weeks...
9862 days....
236,688 hours...
14,201,280 minutes....
852,076,800 seconds....
It Sounded like
Love...Love...Love...
The Eternal emotion
The Eternal Language
The Eternal source of Life
The only cause of human existence,
The finest of all feelings,
Apart from lust.
I really owe you all this time
For being with me
As my
S.o.u.l.m.a.t.e.

Wednesday, March 21, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
our marriage anniversary
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 21 March 2018

This is Not only a 'TIME' We've spent together... But, 1,065,096,000 Times My Heart Echoed your name 'My Dear' During this.. 27 years... - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 852,076,800 seconds.... It Sounded like Love...Love...Love... The Eternal emotion The Eternal Language The Eternal source of Life - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -Yes, LOVE is the eternal source of life and your heart beats every second for your love. An exquisitely beautiful poem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 March 2018

It Sounded like Love...Love...Love... The Eternal emotion The Eternal Language.. a very original poem.. a fine way of expressing deep felt love. thank u. dear poet. tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 March 2018

The Eternal emotion embraces the Eternal Language and the Eternal source of Life. God is our eternal father and we have unlimited trust on him. He is dearer and nearer. His name is echoed in heart and soul. Infinite time we feel him and search him. An excellent poem is beautifully penned...10

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Bipasha D 02 April 2018

That's quite passionate and romantic. Best wishes for your marriage anniversary

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 August 2019

Ah what a poem coming straight from the heart and ordering the head to do all the maths and the details, lovely, I loved it.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 July 2019

I liked how this poem has been crafted. So honest and so passionate. Words with the count of times on how you show your love to your wife is a very unique way of expressing one's love. A beautiful poem so heartwarming and full of tenderness.

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A quintessential quantifying of the most qualitative emotion-love! I really owe you all this time For being with me As my S.o.u.l.m.a.t.e. Lovely lines loaded with love. Well done my friend!

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Savita Tyagi 21 July 2018

Love the finest of emotions expressed with all the passion and intensity. This is the language when both heart and mind are drenched in love. Best wishes for many more anniversaries.

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Dr Antony Theodore 08 May 2018

Love...Love...Love... The Eternal emotion The Eternal Language The Eternal source of Life The only cause of human existence......y es apart from...... love remains in the deepest recesses of the heart.... beautiful dear poet. tony

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Devanshu Patel

Devanshu Patel

Kapadwanj, Gujarat (India)
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