Devanshu Patel


Eternity - Poem by Devanshu Patel

This is
Not only a
'TIME'
We've spent together...
But,
1,065,096,000
Times
My Heart
Echoed your name
'My Dear'
During this..
27 years...
324 months...
1408 weeks...
9862 days....
236,688 hours...
14,201,280 minutes....
852,076,800 seconds....
It Sounded like
Love...Love...Love...
The Eternal emotion
The Eternal Language
The Eternal source of Life
The only cause of human existence,
The finest of all feelings,
Apart from lust.
I really owe you all this time
For being with me
As my
S.o.u.l.m.a.t.e.

Topic(s) of this poem: love and life

Form: Blank Verse


Poet's Notes about The Poem

our marriage anniversary

Comments about Eternity by Devanshu Patel

  • Aniruddha Pathak (8/11/2019 6:17:00 AM)

    Ah what a poem coming straight from the heart
    and ordering the head to do all the maths and the details,
    lovely, I loved it.
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  • Rose Marie Juan-austin (7/20/2019 3:31:00 PM)

    I liked how this poem has been crafted.
    So honest and so passionate.
    Words with the count of times on how you show
    your love to your wife is a very unique way of
    expressing one's love.
    A beautiful poem so heartwarming and
    full of tenderness.
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    (7/30/2019 10:12:00 AM)

    Very happy to read your heartwarming feedback! I thank you from the core of my heart.....a lots of best wishes and blessings!

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  • Jez Brul (1/3/2019 5:46:00 PM)

    Revisiting this poem for the 3rd time....still amazing! (Report)Reply

    (1/3/2019 9:18:00 PM)

    I have no words to thank you. Appreciated. I am very grateful to you for your often visit, God bless you.

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  • Jez Brul (9/1/2018 12:04:00 AM)

    Revisiting this poem amazed me time and again...So romantic...to my poem list. (Report)Reply

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  • Howard The Motivational Poet Simon (8/25/2018 8:56:00 AM)

    A quintessential quantifying of the most qualitative emotion-love!
    I really owe you all this time
    For being with me
    As my
    S.o.u.l.m.a.t.e.
    Lovely lines loaded with love. Well done my friend!
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    (8/29/2018 4:59:00 PM)

    I heartily appreciate invaluable comment for my poem and my love towards my wife. Thanks and be happy ever.

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  • Jez Brul (7/25/2018 10:49:00 PM)

    This is a great poem...outpouring with love and compassion...10++++++++ (Report)Reply

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  • Savita Tyagi (7/21/2018 7:31:00 AM)

    Love the finest of emotions expressed with all the passion and intensity. This is the language when both heart and mind are drenched in love. Best wishes for many more anniversaries. (Report)Reply

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  • Drtony Brahmin (5/8/2018 1:13:00 AM)

    Love...Love...Love...
    The Eternal emotion
    The Eternal Language
    The Eternal source of Life
    The only cause of human existence......y es apart from...... love remains in the deepest recesses of the heart.... beautiful dear poet. tony
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  • Bipasha D (4/2/2018 2:05:00 PM)

    That's quite passionate and romantic. Best wishes for your marriage anniversary (Report)Reply

    (4/2/2018 4:04:00 PM)

    Hearty thanks for both: your comment and wishes...

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (3/23/2018 3:24:00 PM)

    The Eternal emotion embraces the Eternal Language and the Eternal source of Life. God is our eternal father and we have unlimited trust on him. He is dearer and nearer. His name is echoed in heart and soul. Infinite time we feel him and search him. An excellent poem is beautifully penned...10 (Report)Reply

    (3/24/2018 12:30:00 AM)

    Thanks a lot for your precious time and comments....Sir!

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  • Drtony Brahmin (3/23/2018 8:34:00 AM)

    It Sounded like
    Love...Love...Love...
    The Eternal emotion
    The Eternal Language.. a very original poem.. a fine way of expressing deep felt love. thank u. dear poet. tony
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    (3/23/2018 11:46:00 AM)

    Hundreds of hearty thanks Sir, ...it's really a great moment for me to read such compliments from a versatile poet like you...greatly obliged...

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  • Bharati Nayak (3/21/2018 7:19:00 PM)

    This is
    Not only a
    'TIME'
    We've spent together...
    But,
    1,065,096,000
    Times
    My Heart
    Echoed your name
    'My Dear'
    During this..
    27 years...

    - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
    852,076,800 seconds....
    It Sounded like
    Love...Love...Love...
    The Eternal emotion
    The Eternal Language
    The Eternal source of Life
    - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -Yes, LOVE is the eternal source of life and your heart beats every second for your love.

    An exquisitely beautiful poem.
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    (3/23/2018 11:53:00 AM)

    I am really very happy to read your comments...perhaps you don't know how much encouraged I am! ..Stay blessed...and also connected with comments..

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, March 21, 2018



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