Evening Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Evening

Rating: 5.0


What a beautiful evening, it's become.
As the nightbirds, have just begun, to
sing. And, as the hummingbird joins in,
beautiful harmony they bring. As the
crickets chirp along, to the mystic of
the song. And the setting of the sun, my
heart comes undone. In awe of the spirit,
the father, and the son, the holy one.

Sunday, July 29, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: awe,god,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 26 February 2022

It's magnificent poem so elegantly crafted. My poetic eyes can visualize the wonderful scene that your poetic soul has captured...nightbirds, hummingbirds, crickets and all make this poem endearing...top score!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 August 2018

It is a beautiful poem on Evening having touching expression and nice collocation. The way of presentation is so nice. Let me cite some lines...... As the nightbirds, have just begun, to sing. And, as the hummingbird joins in, beautiful harmony they bring. As the crickets chirp along, to the mystic of the song. And the setting of the sun, my.......... Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.

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Rebecca Navarre 12 August 2018

Thank you! .. Kumarmani, For such an ever so thoughtful and kind reply! .. Your poetry brings much thought, much compassion and heart, much meaning in every word and part, for all! .. Thank you! .. Ever so many blessings! ..

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