Evening Sun Poem by Rafique Farooqi

Evening Sun

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Missing you on some evening
When shadows are longer
To sum up mysteries of longing
Closing doors on sun downing 
Like all the birds and flowers

Claws of cold serpentine glacier night
Inching closer and closer
Enhancing the dreams
Campaigned with zest
And love to not fall down
On yellow red and crimson 
Tears of the sun

You touch gently on my shoulder
Like piano key rippling in melodious moan
your silky hair slipping 
With a  serene promise
To hold down hands forever  

Searing Glow of the sun
Hauling your unspoken words
Cradling my nights with quite smiles
Soothing my tender knees
Bowed on worship of hollow wows 

From nowhere a  voice raised
Breaking the silence billows 
With archaic sea wave 
Sweeping all wows
Ruffling aimlessly on sand dunes
Of woven  dreams 
And i step back on night falls
On each delivered evening sun
Every time i miss you endlessly

Monday, January 30, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: evening
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
On sunday evening i missed my dream, it was shing dream.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 21 August 2018

Such a wonderful write, a lovely feel n beautiful imagery!

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Jazib Kamalvi 26 March 2017

A wonderful and nostalgic remembering of marital life. Thanks.

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Nosheen Irfan 30 January 2017

A beautiful poem. Quite enchanting. The paradox of evening sun captures the imagination of the reader. A beautiful write on love n loss. A10

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Rafique Farooqi

Rafique Farooqi

Dist. Gujranwala village Madni Pur
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