Evergreen Street Poem by Lee Degnan

Evergreen Street

Rating: 5.0


Brisk winter air, so cold!
and the sound
of a million snowflakes
hitting the ground,
Never had I seen it
snow so hard
as we got ready
to play in the front yard
Headed straight to where
the plows made dunes,
cutting out alleyways and
cozy little rooms...
Soon dunes became castles,
pristine and white,
Two sister princesses
and one brother knight....

But my favorite part
out of it all-
Evergreen Street,
to watch the snow fall!
My father would pile us
all in his car,
his little Volkswagen,
it wasn't very far
Plowing through this street
making our lone tracks,
branches come out at us
like reindeer antler racks
Evergreens surrounded us
as we drove in further
heavy snow weighted them
like a canopy of winter
Beautiful and sparkling, surreal to
the rest of the world,
made coming here a favorite
to this little girl....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ana Monnar 03 September 2007

You painted a lovely picture with words.

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Duncan Wyllie 06 May 2007

This is sooo good, Brisk winter air, so cold! and the sound of a million snowflakes Top writing again from you Lee All the best Love duncan X

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Roger Bowman 07 December 2006

Beautiful and sparkling...Lee It reminds me of my chilhood when my parents used to take me to the mountain and play with the snow. Lovely...great Roger

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Untitiled and unnamed 29 October 2006

A well spoken write, I belive the best has been spoken by the peple beneath me, I did enjoy this, and could see clearly the picture that you painted, Wel done, The other lee...

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David Gerardino 11 October 2006

Lee, one of your best,10

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