Secret Admirer

Rating: 5.0
I know I'm not supposed to be here
but listen if you will
It's as if I cannot think clear
life's a bitter pill
Endless days and sleepless nights
completely robbed of sleep
those times it's you in my thoughts
my secret that I keep
mesmerized by eyes seducing me
by no fault of your own
But I'll be damned if I can ever be
trusted on my own
if there was one day you might
ever feel the same
chances are it would probably incite
the utmost dangerous game
I've tried and I've failed to
let these feelings go
but seeing as I've come to you
I've let my feelings show
luckily you didn't notice this
you are not to blame
this girl who'll eternally imagine your kiss
remember not my name
Monday, October 16, 2006
Iron Jonath 29 January 2018
No doubt its really nice
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Phil Dispenza 09 June 2008
What are you doing in my head
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Broken Peaces 30 December 2007
Just one you must be joking, I find that hard to believe, lovely write don't we all live in hope top marks Chris
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Meggie Gultiano 03 November 2007
Lovely written from a beautiful lady
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Ashley Maurer 28 August 2007
Definitely brings alot of memories back for anyone who had that little secret crush. Love your writting style, and you really go about the subject nicely =) -Ash
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Blue angel Florida 18 August 2007
That is lovely! Thanks!
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Jemarie Ragudo 16 August 2007
Your poem reminded me of a great crush I had when I was in 6th grade. You're a very effective narrative poet. I like your style.
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Violet Llewellyn 10 May 2007
I really liked this poem. I feel the same way about someone.... -Storm
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Dee Daffodil 08 March 2007
Nicely done Lee! ! Hugs, Dee
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Roger Bowman 07 December 2006
I 100% and more agree with Doc.You are amazing.A 10 along with many other of your poemos. Lots of love Roger
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