Every Moon Sets -06: The Burnt Wing Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Every Moon Sets -06: The Burnt Wing

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Your black flames

Like the venom of

A hypnotizing eye started

Emanating from the

Dark nipples of faithlessness.



And like a sweet deceit-

Burnt the wings of

A midnight moth

Venturing into

The never retreating sky

Of shameless desires.

Every Moon Sets -06: The Burnt Wing
Sunday, October 8, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: faith,loneliness,longing,sabotage,sad love,separation,shattered
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lopamudra Kajolika 15 November 2017

And like a sweet deceit- Burnt the wings of A midnight moth Venturing into The never retreating sky Of shameless desires. Wow, a sweet note of your unsung songs revealed 10++++++ for the sharing.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 09 October 2017

nd like a sweet deceit- Burnt the wings of A midnight moth Venturing into The never retreating sky Of shameless desires. A great rare poem less understood, more loved. Thanks for the poem full of so beautiful imageries. 10+++++++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 November 2017

Thank you dear Rini for your lovely remarks and the words of inspiration.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 November 2017

Thank you dear Rini dear for your lovely remarks.

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Sabita Sahoo 09 October 2017

Emanating from the Dark nipples of faithlessness. Loved the line, so nice. Thanks for the sharing. 10++++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 November 2017

Thank you Sabita for your lovely remarks and the words of inspiration.

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Anita Aparajita Das 08 October 2017

And like a sweet deceit- Burnt the wings of A midnight moth Venturing into The never retreating sky Of shameless desires. Wow, a sweet note of your unsung songs revealed, Subhas. Am I correct? However,10++++ for it..

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 08 October 2017

Thank you sir Neetu for the remarks.

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Binayakumar Mohanty 08 October 2017

Millions of midnight moths with burnt wings still venture into never retreating sky. Heart shaking thoughts

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 08 October 2017

Thank you sir for your gracious remarks.

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Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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