Every Moon Sets -07: The Dark Blue Evening Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Every Moon Sets -07: The Dark Blue Evening

Rating: 5.0


And still

It was not all over,

As if you wanted to listen

To the dying echoes

Of my leafless urge

Snaking through the

Valley of my just widowed heart.



While the shape of dead tolls

In the blue evening

Till the last purple flame

Of lust for life-

Dies away, leaving

Heaps of ashes

On the bald foreheads

Of the darkest hours-

In the nuptial bed

Of my crystal heart.

Every Moon Sets -07: The Dark Blue Evening
Sunday, October 8, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness,longing,sad love,separation,shadows,shattered
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lopamudra Kajolika 15 November 2017

As if you wanted to listen To the dying echoes Of my leafless urge Snaking through the Valley of my just widowed heart. Superb imagery. A great poem to read. 10+++ for it.

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Rajendra Rout 07 November 2017

Heaps of ashes On the bald foreheads Of the darkest hours- In the nuptial bed Of my crystal heart. Great poem sir.thanks for shairing....10++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 November 2017

Thank you Rajendra for your lovely remarks and the words of inspiration.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 November 2017

Thank you dear Rajendra for your lovely remarks.

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Nosheen Irfan 12 October 2017

Superb imagery. A great poem to read. Enjoyed it a lot. A poem that gives poetic delight in abundance. A big 10.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 October 2017

My heart felt thanks my revered Ma'am. Your inspiring words and kind remarks made my day today.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 09 October 2017

As if you wanted to listen To the dying echoes Of my leafless urge Snaking through the Valley of my just widowed heart. Great poem, great imageries. Loved it. 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 October 2017

Thank you Rini dear for the loving remarks.

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Sabita Sahoo 09 October 2017

As if you wanted to listen /To the dying echoes/Of my leafless urge/Snaking through the / Valley of my just widowed heart. Great poem.10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 October 2017

Thank you Sabita dear for the loving remarks.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

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Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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