Every Moon Sets -08: The Mourn Of The Skylark Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Every Moon Sets -08: The Mourn Of The Skylark

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A skylark mourns

Quite a furlong away

May be on the other bank

Beyond the river

Of the conjugal pleasure

Flowing into the sea of voidness.



Or worlds apart

Beyond the mist of separation

That sings unique notes

Notes of broken glasses,

Notes of burnt gardens-

From a flute of death



Carried through the tides

Of dark winter breeze

To the pyre of mourning

The death of my nascent dream

Before its first cry.

Every Moon Sets -08: The Mourn Of The Skylark
Sunday, October 8, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: heart song,heartbreak,loneliness,longing,sad love,sadness,separation,shadows,shattered
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Suratha Kumar Rout 05 November 2017

Carried through the tides Of dark winter breeze To the pyre of mourning The death of my nascent dream Before its first cry. A beautiful poem shared. 10

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 November 2017

Thank you Suratha for these inspiring words in these lovely remarks.

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Anita Aparajita Das 09 October 2017

A skylark mourns Quite a furlong away May be on the other bank Beyond the river Of the conjugal pleasure Flowing into the sea of voidness. Lovely poem shared. 10++ for it.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 November 2017

Thank you Neetu for these inspiring words in these lovely remarks.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 09 October 2017

Beyond the river Of the conjugal pleasure Flowing into the sea of voidness. You can make such real pains tranmit into other's heart. Great skill. Thanks. 10++++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 November 2017

Thank you Rini for these inspiring words in these lovely remarks.

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Sabita Sahoo 09 October 2017

Beyond the river Of the conjugal pleasure Flowing into the sea of voidness. Loved the order the river of voidness. Thanks for the nice poem. 10++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 November 2017

Thank you Sabita for these inspiring words in these lovely remarks.

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Anita Aparajita Das 08 October 2017

The death of my nascent dream Before its first cry. Beautiful poem. Nicely penned. 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 08 October 2017

Thank you Neetu for the lovely remarks.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

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Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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