abhimanyu kumar.s

Gold Star - 9,607 Points (31.12.1988 / venkatgiri kota)

Eyes - Poem by abhimanyu kumar.s

The eyes are here
The pearls are here
My love is here
Black lines
Artificial pencil
Your feathers
On your marbles
Love you jaanu.

I get captured
Find myself in it
Striking stares
Stares I swear
It makes me yours
When I see your eyes
lord I feel that
My eyes are not here.

Comments about Eyes by abhimanyu kumar.s

  • (12/23/2011 10:37:00 AM)

    good lines written which brings out the love u ve on the person whom u ve in ur mind. (Report) Reply

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  • (11/24/2011 6:08:00 AM)

    good writing on eyes of your s and your lover s10 (Report) Reply

  • (10/13/2011 1:09:00 AM)

    this poem reminds me of my love sir (Report) Reply

  • Amy Marie (6/17/2011 8:36:00 AM)

    I love the nice short style :) (Report) Reply

  • Arfa Iris (6/13/2011 1:00:00 PM)

    good poem......keep going.. (Report) Reply

  • (6/12/2011 2:54:00 PM)

    You express hypnotism nicely from the view of one hypnotized.... (Report) Reply

  • (6/3/2011 8:04:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem~
    simply but delicately written, great work ~
    Eyes are the windows of one's soul, you color the windows nicely!
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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 27, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, June 10, 2011

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