A Lonely Heart Poem by abhimanyu kumar.s

A Lonely Heart

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To the moment I can write
In presence of my breath
With evidence of my veins strength
That I feel lonely on earth
Under the roof of almighty
I miss her to the extent
The very extent of my existence.

How to express this moment
Were I am hungry for her
I feel a pain in my heart
It seems to shatter my nerves
I want her in this moment
In this painful moment of tranquility
But she is far as I am.

A Lonely Heart
Tuesday, November 1, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kushi Kush 29 October 2013

better luck next time for your love

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Linda Moore 11 December 2017

Your words stir the emotion. Well done

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 11 December 2017

Thank you dear, .

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Mercy Jerry 14 December 2017

My dear Abhi, your words ever so laced with emotions... Simple yet loaded. Great piece

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 14 December 2017

Thank you so much Mercy! ! !

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Chinedu Dike 01 March 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings, very heartfelt with strong emotions. A beautiful love poem. Thanks for sharing Kumar.

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It reads even better the second time. Such a creative and compelling composition!

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Loaded with love and loneliness. A creative and compelling composition!

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Sarab 15 December 2017

Superb poem.... Heart touching

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Harishkumarns 15 December 2017

Really heart touching sir

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