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Eyes: White-Holes

Rating: 4.9

Before you scrape
and erase their marks
when I do read
few letters stick
on your lips
How, I do flow!
in the moist layers
with conscious mind of
some other space
and within no moment

I sink in eyes...
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Saadat Tahir 24 May 2009

oh..its very very good thanx for the share its a tenner cheers

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Noha El3wdy 25 May 2009

lovely............. thnx for sharing

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Saadat Tahir 24 May 2009

oh..its very very good thanx for the share its a tenner cheers

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a beautiful work..! i like ur poems a lot........

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rago rago 23 May 2009

you have penned and made a good vision of thought....to come on real life...when coffee is served......fantastic write......see my 10++........

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antony theodore 21 March 2018

I sink in eyes... for ages... for lives going to die coming to life...imagination........ vision.. liked ur last sentence... when i return...... coffee.. such an imagination.. thank you. tony brahmin

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Aya Sunga Askert 20 March 2018

I enjoy your writing.

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Mj Lemon 12 May 2017

This is tremendous. I've read and reread this several times, and each time I am struck by a different set of images. This could involve the imagination....the power of the word to create the ideal vision, teh desire, and then the fade away. Once the coffee arrives, there is the need to put down the word and return to daily living. I shall have to come back to this gem again and again.

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Valsa George 11 March 2017

A profound write and I don't think I have understood it in all its depth! My inability...... I admit !

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Susan Williams 09 January 2017

Extraordinary. This image caught my imagination and I do not think I will be forgetting it any time soon! ! ! ! - - - - - when I do read few letters stick on your lips 10+++++++++++++

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