Dimensions Poem by Muhammad Ali

Though my existence is as transitory as a flower or the script on the waves, I don't mind and I love my life as long as I can give a little joy to others! A poem with profound thoughts! !

very intricate meaning...every dimension dealt with care...a flexibility of character is seen as life changes and u endure it with a grin.....loved this one! ! ! ! your love of life is asserted in undeniable clarity! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

GREAT WORK DONE ALI! ! nice flow..beautifully write.. 10/10 with lov sumi

'I am the script on the layers what the waves trying to convey till I splash on the brink I love my life' - these are lines with unique impact. Adore the general feel created by this poem, I agree with Faiz, here is a very sensitive and subtle craft.Keep on! Best wishes. A.

we have different dimensions to our nature.our life is short, but, all the same, we all love it.your philosophy touches me.10+

I love the 3rd stanza so much! stunning poem

A great work, Ali. Life is loved and lived no matter the obstacles that may arise. There are few challenges yet many experiences! An absolutely great verse.

Wow- - absolutely lovely poem- - - - -You, a true lover of life- -To quote a few lines- - - - I become pale leaving my tree falling to ground I love my life - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - I am the junction between day and night your coffee time will be here tommorow may you live millions evenings I love the Life! - - - - - - - - - -To my poem list.

Ah-ha! ! ! A poem that I have not yet read! ! ! My dear friend, please write more poems- they are eagerly awaited! I am a reader of your poems- -and I love my life! ! I must post while I can- this page is flipping back and forth

A beautiful write. Life is not always kind. It does not last but love life as long as you live and give happiness to others. Great thoughts expressed beautifully.