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I become pale
leaving my tree
falling to ground
I love my life
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I am so hard
staying on the road
heavy bodies passing over me
I am not cracking

I love my life
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Valsa George 03 February 2014

Though my existence is as transitory as a flower or the script on the waves, I don't mind and I love my life as long as I can give a little joy to others! A poem with profound thoughts! !

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Yelena M. 13 April 2009

'I am the script on the layers what the waves trying to convey till I splash on the brink I love my life' - these are lines with unique impact. Adore the general feel created by this poem, I agree with Faiz, here is a very sensitive and subtle craft.Keep on! Best wishes. A.

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sumaira .....ir 20 February 2009

GREAT WORK DONE ALI! ! nice flow..beautifully write.. 10/10 with lov sumi

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Seema Aarella 14 February 2009

very intricate meaning...every dimension dealt with care...a flexibility of character is seen as life changes and u endure it with a grin.....loved this one! ! ! ! your love of life is asserted in undeniable clarity! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Akhtar Jawad 20 July 2016

A thought poem, we are born to die, let us spread as much color and aroma as much we can, and add some color to the garden in that we were born.

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Aya Sunga Askert 20 March 2018

I love the 3rd stanza so much! stunning poem

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Mj Lemon 06 March 2018

A great work, Ali. Life is loved and lived no matter the obstacles that may arise. There are few challenges yet many experiences! An absolutely great verse.

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Bharati Nayak 10 May 2017

Wow- - absolutely lovely poem- - - - -You, a true lover of life- -To quote a few lines- - - - I become pale leaving my tree falling to ground I love my life - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - I am the junction between day and night your coffee time will be here tommorow may you live millions evenings I love the Life! - - - - - - - - - -To my poem list.

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Susan Williams 07 May 2017

Ah-ha! ! ! A poem that I have not yet read! ! ! My dear friend, please write more poems- they are eagerly awaited! I am a reader of your poems- -and I love my life! ! I must post while I can- this page is flipping back and forth

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Nosheen Irfan 13 August 2016

A beautiful write. Life is not always kind. It does not last but love life as long as you live and give happiness to others. Great thoughts expressed beautifully.

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