(f) 4 (Haiku) Are Your Lips Tingling- Foursome Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(f) 4 (Haiku) Are Your Lips Tingling- Foursome

Rating: 5.0


The wind brushed my skin
Felt like your caress, so divine...
Aching for your touch

I entered your dreams
Riding on a bright moonbeam
While you were sleeping

My soul taking wings
Touching the face of my beloved
You absorbed me within

Alas, the time is up
With a last kiss, I depart
Are your lips tingling?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Diane Violet 09 February 2007

Beautiful ku's...enjoyed them very much..................Diane

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Original Unknown Girl 09 February 2007

What a beautiful collection of 'ku's.... I' m really liking your work T.O....... HG: -) xx

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 09 February 2007

Stellar imagery....solid crafting...keep on Rockin' my dear! F. j. R.

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