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A poignant poem Andrew, beautifully written! ! A reminder when there's A recession around, eventually where you live - it could become a ghost town. Best wishes! ! *10*! ! Friend Thad

vevry nicely described. I loved it.

The bleakness in this one, almost unbarable and yet strangely we see a glimmer of hope shining down on these buildings, , the sun, And then we notice natures new shoots sprouting forth where they had no chance or choice before A very well written poem AGAIN from an already skillfull writer Take care Love duncan X

There is a sadness in these verses. What once was great and thriving but now in decay. Reminds me of the 'ghost towns' of western movies. One can almost feel the lonliness. Masterful write indeed, Andrew. Thank you Richard

A sad sign of the times Andrew, as always I can picture the scene so well, a lot of industry has now gone from the Black Country, the people so hard-working, toiling in bad conditions, well penned, Lynda xxx