i am fading in the dark
the darkness is evolving in my soul
The pain is rushing through ny veins
No one there to pick me up when i fall
I am just fading
Fading in the dark
This world is nothing but pain
And i have nothing to gain
No one to trust
No one the share my feelings with
I am just fading away
No reason for me to live
No reason for me to care
This world is a place very lonely and cold
Wish there was someone for me to hold
Wish there was someone i could trust
But i am just like the shadow in the dark
The more dark it becomes
The more i fade away
i am fading away
Just like my happiness....
Im just fading away
Into the darkness
Forever...
And no one can save me
Just fading away
you really good in dealing with your pain in this poem...you it's really hard to be a shadow in the dark!
u hve describe ur pain in very well manner! fading away in dark! ! ! ! ! hey emo girl very well written! !
A poignant write expressing the pain & discomforts in details.... well thought
I love this poem it is great(10+++) ! ! I want to cry but, I can't feel that emotion inside.
your great at writing i read all your other ones and you are great at writing check me out and let me know what u think
In fading away you sprout the fragrance........ fantastic write.........
a poem highly sensitive and emotional by the contrast between this delicate and beautiful human being and cruel world in which lives......10++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This world is a place very lonely and cold Wish there was someone for me to hold Wish there was someone i could trust But i am just like the shadow in the dark The more dark it becomes this is a real fading away feelings, the title and the body of the poem.. both inter linked well.. melodic piece of poem.. heartfelt and soul touching one is this poem..well done..10/10