Betrayal Poem by Broken heart emo

Well written! But when someone betrays me I always get revenge...using martial arts! Lol no thats for self-defense, but sometimes a small little jabs punch doesn't hurt...that much...lol 10/10!

I can so relate to this... great poem and written greatly.

this would make a good song! i agree with everyone down below!

Good write................10s

ugghhh! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ...this poem is so true! I couldn't help but think of a couple of 'betrayers' that I've come across in my life. But back to your poem. It Is very well written and I can easily see all of rhe emotion that's behind it. Good Work. Izzey Strange

A good poem about letting your emotions roll out. Well written.

I like the poem and l have written it to someone who did the same to me

very well written. the emotions just come pouring across!

Uuuh! ! Very sad and painful. Your expression was very clear and well understood, my sympathy.

I did have to see what the writer on the top of the list was writing about. I'm sorry this sounds like a page from an angry teenagers diary. The typos from #1 on the list? This poem may appeal to the tween set. You seemed to say the same things over and over just in a different way. The is no depth to this at all. It was all over the place. I can't lie and add some fluffy comment, that is doing you no justice. I'm not trying to hurt your feelings. If you have everyone saying this is awesome all the time and not pointing out the truth you will never grow as a poet. We all want that every day. I've taken my fair share of lumps.