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Betrayal - Poem by Broken heart emo

So this is it….
I finally found out the truth
Never expected it from you! ! !
I thought you were my friend….
But you weren’t….
You were just using me just like you used all the other people…
For your own selfish reasons…
I always thought those people who left your friendship were wrong! !
But no, what I thought was wrong! !
I’m never gonna forgive you…
Nor will others! !
Because you are a person of betrayal…
No one can ever trust you…
You betrayed once… so you can betray again…
One day everyone will find the truth…
And you will be all alone…
Begging for forgiveness…
Then you will realize your behavior! !
N regret
All you have done…
And come apologizing back…
But I know you
You are as stubborn as ever…
And you will never do that…
Because there is one thing you are good at
That is

Comments about Betrayal by Broken heart emo

  • (10/2/2018 12:01:00 PM)

    I like the poem and l have written it to someone who did the same to me (Report)Reply

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  • (5/7/2015 8:53:00 AM)

    very well written. the emotions just come pouring across! (Report)Reply

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  • Amitava Sur (7/19/2014 11:25:00 PM)

    Uuuh! ! Very sad and painful. Your expression was very clear and well understood, my sympathy. (Report)Reply

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  • Robin Bennett (7/20/2012 3:28:00 PM)

    I did have to see what the writer on the top of the list was writing about. I'm sorry this sounds like a page from an angry teenagers diary. The typos from #1 on the list? This poem may appeal to the tween set. You seemed to say the same things over and over just in a different way. The is no depth to this at all. It was all over the place.
    I can't lie and add some fluffy comment, that is doing you no justice. I'm not trying to hurt your feelings. If you have everyone saying this is awesome all the time and not pointing out the truth you will never grow as a poet. We all want that every day. I've taken my fair share of lumps.

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  • (7/14/2012 9:19:00 AM)

    the poem was... ouch!
    I can relate to this.... they made us day they will suffer as well...
    nice work.... :)

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  • (1/12/2012 10:37:00 PM)

    I didnt think it was that deep or great- typical- not bad- (Report)Reply

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  • (10/5/2011 10:42:00 AM)

    I can so relate to this... great poem and written greatly. (Report)Reply

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  • Aqeb Benazir (8/22/2011 11:43:00 AM)

    this would make a good song! i agree with everyone down below! (Report)Reply

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  • (7/9/2011 12:29:00 AM)

    Well written! But when someone betrays me I always get revenge...using martial arts! Lol no thats for self-defense, but sometimes a small little jabs punch doesn't hurt...that 10/10! (Report)Reply

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  • (5/7/2011 8:03:00 AM)

    ugghhh! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ...this poem is so true!
    I couldn't help but think of a couple of 'betrayers' that I've come across in my life.
    But back to your poem. It Is very well written and I can easily see all of rhe emotion that's behind it. Good Work.

    Izzey Strange

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  • Emma Adamyan (9/23/2009 7:34:00 AM)

    i liked ur poem, thank u. if it was created out of an inspiration, its a good one. if it was created out of the inspiration that provoked ur pain, its a good one, but remember one thing, the time will come bringing to u a knight, so ur heart will stop bleeding and instead of the scare u`ll find out a lovely flower which is called LOVE... i wish u good luck dear :) (Report)Reply

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  • (9/17/2009 6:56:00 PM)

    Good write................10s (Report)Reply

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  • Romeo Della Valle (9/17/2009 12:30:00 AM)

    Well-penned, my friend, I have a poem with same tittle, hope you have the time to read it, Love and Peace, Romeo (Thanks for sharing) (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 14, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 7, 2011

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