Faith Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Faith

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Time keeps slipping. I can't seem to
make it stay. Down on my knees, no
matter how hard I pray. But, I know
when that time comes, he'll show me
the way. When the words won't come
but, my heart has so much to say.
When the dark eclipses the day. And
I can't find the light, not even a
ray. When I feel like I am losing it
all, I know his love won't fade. When
the ocean takes my heart down and under,
with a, benevolent wave.

Saturday, October 13, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: faith,god
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 16 October 2018

Atta girl. When God seems to have turned away, turn around and look- -God has been there all along! ! ! ! ! Your faith is strong knowing His love doesn't fade! 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++=

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Rebecca Navarre 16 October 2018

:) Thank you! .. Dear Susan, For such a heartfelt, beautiful reply! .. Your poetry has such depth, beauty and light, that speaks to the heart with words so bright! .. God bless, dear friend! .. May you find sunshine around every bend! .. :)

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Unnikrishnan E S 14 October 2018

Hi Becca, Why wail on the time That has slipped away? What has gone Can not be turned back. Live your today, worthy Of His benevolence. Try making our life better A tiny bit, than yesterday, And make it a wee bit better for another human being. You can do it By your lovely poems. All the best.

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Rebecca Navarre 16 October 2018

Thank you! .. Unnikrishnan, For your ever so inspiring and beautiful reply! .. Your poetry brings such sentiment and heart to all who read! .. Thank you ever so much! .. God bless! ..

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 October 2018

When I feel like I am losing it all, I know his love won't fade. When the ocean takes my heart down and under, with a, benevolent wave......so touching and impressive. A beautiful poem so nicely executed.10

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Rebecca Navarre 14 October 2018

Thank you! .. Kumarmani, For such a thoughtful and beautifully kind reply! .. Your poetry paints such beautiful imagery of God, and life, that so powerfully touches the hearts of all those who visit your site! .. Thank you ever so much! .. God bless! ..

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