The leaves are falling
singly or in a cluster
Every gust shakes
the quiet clinging to dying love
The ground below awaits
a red carpet
upon which will walk
the last steps of our love
And each crunch will ask
Did I let go
because I got tired
Or
Did I let go
because you got tired?
Part 2 Shelley continues “”Yellow, and black, and pale, and hectic red, Pestilence-stricken multitudes: O thou, Who chariotest to their dark wintry bed” Yes! Shelley knew, perhaps, that you would pen this sequel to his masterpiece. Another masterpiece, Nosheen.
Shelley in Ode to The West Wind: “ from whose unseen presence the leaves dead Are driven, like ghosts from an enchanter fleeing, ...” And you “Every gust shakes The clinging to dying love..” Wow! ! ! These two lines condense the essence of poetry. Continue
Excellent! A beautiful poem... appreciated and admired. Top 🌟
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow fine metaphorical comparison of feelings to Autumn and fall. It's a superb poem. Kudos! Plz do read my newest poem titled, 'babies cry anywhere "