Fallen Star Poem by Timber Koleden

Fallen Star

Rating: 5.0

For time untold I blazed on high
Light 'neath my wings, I brightened thy sky
When thee walked in shadows of night
I shone o'er thee and made the blackness bright

The years have passed away in speed
On the seas thou look'd to me in need
The kings of old headed my blaze
My icy glow, subject of astronomers gaze

Didst thou ever think to ask of me
Whether I wanted to shine so bright for thee
Didst thou ever consider me
As a creature shining selflessly

Behold! I shone till my wings crack'd
My flame did burn till all strength I lack'd
Then like lightning flash, swift and embered
I died and fell to earth, ne'er to be remembered

The earth was split beneath my wreck
My body was smitten on mountain cleft
In the shadows of thy world 'neath the sky
My fire was quench'd where my body will broken lie

Fallen Star
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Here I tried to encapsulate the viewpoint of a falling/fallen star. I have always been fascinated by stars! I hope that you enjoy this!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jayne Louise Davies 19 November 2025

Wonderful write Timber x Many thanks for sharing!

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Anjandev Roy 19 November 2025

Excellent piece....as always.... thanks a lot....

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Isadora Quagmire 19 November 2025

I read this earlier tonight when the stars were still out, and shortly after reading it I actually saw a shooting star! This poem added so much more excitement and brilliance to that brief glimpse I had!

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Isadora Quagmire 19 November 2025

What an outstanding and awesome poem, Timber! I absolutely loved reading this! I love the thought you put into this poem and the spirit you gave the star! ! ! This is purely brilliant poetic gold, thank you so much for blessing us all with this poem!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 November 2025

Liked the third stanza the most. Very touching lines. Many stars for this wonderful poem!

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Bharati Nayak 09 May 2026

'Didst thou ever think to ask of me Whether I wanted to shine so bright for thee Didst thou ever consider me As a creature shining selflessly', a profound poem!

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joe acacia 09 May 2026

love this poem so much especially the last lines of all the stanzas and the title

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Sunny Quagmire 04 December 2025

I am starstruck too! A wonderful, slightly tragic poem! Really such. a beautiful poem! Love it so much! I hope to see you here on Poemhunter again soon! xxxx

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Rebecca Navarre 02 December 2025

Brilliantly and beautifully shared! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++++ To be remembered in the sky

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Rebecca Navarre 02 December 2025

Absolutely breathtaking! .. As my heart felt each line and word! ..

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