For time untold I blazed on high
Light 'neath my wings, I brightened thy sky
When thee walked in shadows of night
I shone o'er thee and made the blackness bright
The years have passed away in speed
On the seas thou look'd to me in need
The kings of old headed my blaze
My icy glow, subject of astronomers gaze
Didst thou ever think to ask of me
Whether I wanted to shine so bright for thee
Didst thou ever consider me
As a creature shining selflessly
Behold! I shone till my wings crack'd
My flame did burn till all strength I lack'd
Then like lightning flash, swift and embered
I died and fell to earth, ne'er to be remembered
The earth was split beneath my wreck
My body was smitten on mountain cleft
In the shadows of thy world 'neath the sky
My fire was quench'd where my body will broken lie
I read this earlier tonight when the stars were still out, and shortly after reading it I actually saw a shooting star! This poem added so much more excitement and brilliance to that brief glimpse I had!
What an outstanding and awesome poem, Timber! I absolutely loved reading this! I love the thought you put into this poem and the spirit you gave the star! ! ! This is purely brilliant poetic gold, thank you so much for blessing us all with this poem!
Liked the third stanza the most. Very touching lines. Many stars for this wonderful poem!
'Didst thou ever think to ask of me Whether I wanted to shine so bright for thee Didst thou ever consider me As a creature shining selflessly', a profound poem!
love this poem so much especially the last lines of all the stanzas and the title
I am starstruck too! A wonderful, slightly tragic poem! Really such. a beautiful poem! Love it so much! I hope to see you here on Poemhunter again soon! xxxx
Brilliantly and beautifully shared! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++++ To be remembered in the sky
Absolutely breathtaking! .. As my heart felt each line and word! ..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wonderful write Timber x Many thanks for sharing!