Far away on the ocean dreams,
I sailed on my memories' boat
camouflaged by the misty past
and came out with a anecdote.
I found myself into tidal waves
To the twisted turn from my stormy life
With a song or two to face the stroke
I sang my way out of the constant strife...
Great positive outlook in life singing your way out of strife.........Great 10++++++
wonderful.... small and b'ful. loved the first stanza. a simple, flowing poem. great. thank you.
Yes my friend. It is good to sing your way out of strife.. This is a very fine poem.. This poem shows your maturity as a writer. Nice innovative expressions..10 regards Shan
Words flow like honey, dream-like imagery. Always a pleasure to read your fine verse Vaibhav.
With a song or two to face the stroke I sang my way out of the constant strife... Rachel Ann Butler
There's nothing like the beauty of music to sail away from the problems of life. Beautiful flow and poem. 10 love Karin
precise.. wonderfully so. sing the worries way.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a lovely short poem with beautiful imagery.....10