Locked Eyes Poem by Vaibhav Pandey

Locked Eyes

Rating: 4.3


In the face of infinite space between us,
Our eyes were locked on to each other
through the medium of eternal affinity,
withstanding even the barrier of time.

Eyeing a single flutter would have meant
a lifetime of separation, unendurable.
Our lives were captured in that moment
where the effect of time became inconsequent...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lynda Robson 28 August 2009

Locked eyes, a poem written so beautifully, thank you Vaibhav 10 Lynda xx

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Mubeen Sadhika 29 August 2009

Powerful expression. Well penned. Nice to read. deserves 10101010101010

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Ivor Hogg 29 August 2009

the meeting of soulmates

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Ivor Hogg 29 August 2009

the meeting of soulmates

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Marilyn Lott 29 August 2009

Very sweet and romantic. A moment in time one does not often forget. '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Sally Plumb Plumb 04 March 2010

Very enjoyable! Loved it.

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Sheena Aguilar 01 January 2010

a great write...Beautiful.I like it

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Vidi Writes 07 November 2009

Its so wonderful a feeling to read The eternal relation taken fold... I rememeber a quote.... to be told 'It is wrong to think that love comes from Long companionship and persevering courtship. Love is the offspring of spiritual affinity and Unless that affinity is created in a moment, It will not be created for years or even generations” Enjoyed the feeling of Love expressed in this poem.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 03 September 2009

'where the effect of time became inconsequent...' Beautiful poem with sensible imagery. The last lines sums it all so vividly.

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Ravi A 02 September 2009

You have rightly captured the spirit of the theme. I am reminded of one of Mukesh's songs written by Hasrat Jaipuri: 'Dil ke nazar se, nazron ke dil se'. What do you say about 'nazron ke dil se? '. We will be thinking about it for the whole lifetime. Your poem also reflects the same essence. Good.

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