“farewell” Poem by Preetam Shetty
“farewell”
Waving on my dreams,
Trusting my insight,
I fly with a belief,
My wings have got the might.
Today I begin my quest,
To reach a new avenue,
I have armored myself,
Destined for arenas new.
Today I run with pace,
I feel the aroma of cheer,
But the dripping water confuses,
Is it sweat or is it a tear.
Today I have found the ladder,
For my next step, for my gain,
Unexplained is but just one thing,
Deep in my heart there is a pain.
Today my mind is rejoicing,
For finding the way to excel,
But all I hear is my heart whispering,
Wishing you all a “Farewell”
Hey i'dont question on your poem, you god writer and your poem, trust on trust so what the problem, JUST GUD LUCK IN NEXTIME CREAT GUD AND GUD AGAIN.CONGRATS.
A meaningful poem. Creative writing at its best. Well done.; D
How beautifully you have expressed the pain of Farewell...! ! ! Its the toughest thing to do...Brilliant my friend...(finally poemhunter is allowing me to comment)
Brilliant piece! ! ! ! ! the way you have been playing around with words come with years of writing and this poem is a reflection of that...... You kept the reader captivated and longing for more and i just thought that were going to continue.....we want more, more, more and more....... Listen to this 'Today I run with pace, I feel the aroma of cheer, But the dripping water confuses, Is it sweat or is it a tear.' what more can a reader want when you can capture their imagination like this? ? ? ? write more! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
superb and hats off this poem express my emotions regarding my school farewell..... :) please write some more....
Nice expressions picturised giving a lot of hope for we readers.we all love for your earnesty in poems .can you read my poems and comment.
Waving dreams, Trusting insight, you fly in faitjh on wings eith might. very nice expressions dear preetam u convey a lot of courage and hope thank you
Waving on dreams, flying with faith on ur mighty wings destined for new arenas..feeling the aroma of cheer........ very fine dear preetam. really nice. thank you for sharing. gave u a 10
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I would like to translate this poem
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4/24/2024 12:48:35 AM # 1.0.0.1119
I read this poem 3 times, and it really moved me... The sorrow of leaving all your loved ones behind, and the excitement of your new adventures! So very deep and meaningful. You are a great Poet Preetam Shetty. I can really relate to this poem, and I believe others will to. Thankyou, Marina...