“farewell” Poem by Preetam Shetty

you're good, , , i like the way you write meaning full<<<

I liked the way you presented the picture of farewell. I'm speechless. It's beautifull.........

Brilliant piece! ! ! ! ! the way you have been playing around with words come with years of writing and this poem is a reflection of that...... You kept the reader captivated and longing for more and i just thought that were going to continue.....we want more, more, more and more....... Listen to this 'Today I run with pace, I feel the aroma of cheer, But the dripping water confuses, Is it sweat or is it a tear.' what more can a reader want when you can capture their imagination like this? ? ? ? write more! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

How beautifully you have expressed the pain of Farewell...! ! ! Its the toughest thing to do...Brilliant my friend...(finally poemhunter is allowing me to comment)

A meaningful poem. Creative writing at its best. Well done.; D

good one...... :) ...

superb and hats off this poem express my emotions regarding my school farewell..... :) please write some more....

Nice expressions picturised giving a lot of hope for we readers.we all love for your earnesty in poems .can you read my poems and comment.

Waving dreams, Trusting insight, you fly in faitjh on wings eith might. very nice expressions dear preetam u convey a lot of courage and hope thank you

Waving on dreams, flying with faith on ur mighty wings destined for new arenas..feeling the aroma of cheer........ very fine dear preetam. really nice. thank you for sharing. gave u a 10