Blessed Day Poem by Preetam Shetty

Absolutley Beautiful! Father and his child. Well done. loved it.

I like the second stanza: When the little hands Cuffed my smallest finger Oh I can't really express My happiness, my wonder That was amazingly stunning. Such beautiful words written for your own child to express your feelings. The greatest joy of becoming a parent. I don't know how it feels, but when my 'chick-pea' (that's how I call her) niece was born I felt as if she were half mine. But she's growing up really fast, now she turned seven. Enjoy every moment with them. Have a nice day. B.B.

It's very loving piece of poetry with resonance of fatherly love for the innocent child! You know how to say with intensity! Thanks.

you really know how to write romantic poems and trust me you poems are very good that dudes out there can actually use them....... this is brilliant! ! ! !

Such a wonderful piece, words woven like a weaver making a basket, making sure that each and every grass used falls in place to ensure its beauty.You sure know how to express your feelings; that of the first taste of fatherhood.Congrats!

Preetm, you are a great poet. You seem to effortlessly put great thoughts into really poetic language. Thanks for sharing these wonderful moments in such a wonderful way.

Beautiful imagery, beautful rhythm, simply beautiful alot of effort in this and it paid off, thanks for sharing :) ten

Beautiful rhythm and expressions displaying the emotions of a first time parent. Thanks for sharing. A.B.