Farewell Poem by Kwenadi Gaaje

Farewell

Rating: 5.0


Remember the promises we made
The day we met
The songs we sang together
The paths I embarked with you
The tryst in the dark I had with you.

The hand that used to warm me up
Is about to go warm another
A love meant to be mine is no more.


Tomorrow feels so dark
And lonely
Baby I wish not to walk alone
To the pit of loneliness
The journey feels so long without you.

'Goodbye' Is the saddest word in my vocabulary never thought would exist.
It's a pain in me
A strain in me that I even fail to carry on with my life without you.

Even when you are sleeping right beside me
It feels like we are million miles apart
It's a sign that our hearts are drifting further apart.
Our love is ending.

Is there hope to hold on?
Is there faith in me that you're just distracted by your thoughts?
I anticipate your heart isn't singing the same song as your mind.

It kills me to say "Goodbye"
It shatters my soul to see you walking out that door.
It breaks my heart to hear you say " You are to start a new love journey with her ".

I know
It's time to say our final goodbye's
I guess this is how our story ends
Our journey has come to part
Silly me - There's really no need for me to cry
But I'll try not to cry
I'll try to learn to walk down the path of my journey without you in it..

I'll carry the pain in my heart
I hope someday rain will shower off my face and wipe all the tears that filled my eyes with endless sorrow.
I'll try to smile although it hurts.

I am not going to say "Goodbye"
But Farewell
Farewell

Sunday, March 25, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: sad love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Justin X 27 March 2018

I love this one more

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 March 2018

Kwenadi, such a heartfelt poem of the day... congrats for being chosen... big 10+++

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 March 2018

I'll carry the pain in my heart! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 30 March 2018

Tomorrow feels so dark And lonely Baby I wish not to walk alone To the pit of loneliness The journey feels so long without you. The fear of loneliness, so well described.

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Rini Shibu 30 March 2018

Heartfelt poem..Congratulations for poem of the day..10

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Letshela Jonas 15 April 2020

Great and relevant. Thanks for nourishing our minds

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Chinedu Dike 14 April 2018

Well expressed thoughts and feelings, in a verse depicting the whimsical and temperamental nature of love. It touched my heart. Thanks for sharing.

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Bharati Nayak 30 March 2018

Tomorrow feels so dark And lonely Baby I wish not to walk alone To the pit of loneliness The journey feels so long without you.- - - - -A deep, sad and touching poem that finely expresses the looming darkness of a separation.

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Kevin Patrick 30 March 2018

An ardent work of true passion, you've channeled your feelings with great expressions, congratulations for poem of the day! .

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 March 2018

Beautiful poem on love relating to sadness. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.

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Kwenadi Gaaje

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